4JP letter writing

4JP have written some wonderful letters this week. 











Dear Mr. Bennett,
 
I am writing to explain why we should let our caring, helpful alien classmate Ben, stay in our school.  I found him outside with his shining glistening spaceship.  I know it sounds a little bit off but he can help us with Year 4 learning.  First I helped him speaking English, so now he can help us, he is very smart.
 
I know he is funky but he makes people happy.  He listens really well in class.  Ben will never hurt anyone, his heart is as soft as a couch.  One reason Ben should stay is he keeps our tables tidy and spotless.  He can turn as beautiful as a flower if someone does not like him.  One day he helped everyone be quiet in class so that they can hear Mr Powell.  How fantastic is that!  Everyday he listens so that he never gets confused.  When it was PE he was so energetic that even Mr Powell couldn't catch up with him.  Ben works hard and never gives up.
 
First, Ben could help teachers so they don't have to be worried about their old dusty laptops.  At the end of the day he stays at school to clean up.  He can fix the bathrooms and see who leaves them messy.  However, Ben could also be a supply teacher if anyone is ill.  Faster than a blink, he can teach with a whiteboard and everyone of us will understand.  Second, he tells us interesting things about his crazy, magical, magnificent, massive planet.  What a great way of learning stuff!  Wouldn't that be great?  Third he can look back and see if anyone is cheating on their tests.
 
Ben will make ETPS better by helping to pick up litter, tidying our classroom book corners and dusting the IT equipment.  Wouldn't it be amazing to have a more caring, magnificent, and precious aliens turn up at our school?  We would be as magnificent as a clean perfect butterfly.  If Ben didn't come we would as sad as a lonely hippo.  Don't you want positive, thoughtful things in this school?
 
From your kindest,
 
IK  4JP


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​​Dear Mr. Bennett,
 
I am writing to you with a question.  I have found an extra little detail to our school, I've found an alien in the school bins.  It looked lonely but friendly.  It's name is Ben.  He told us that his ship crashed in the field and he got out when we came into school.  He is a good role model, he has wings and healing powers.  How strange!  He distracts people to not be naughty in class.  He helps people when they're tidying up.  He hands out reading records, tucks in chairs and puts glue lids on to help teachers.
 
I know Ben looks dirty and he has funky colours on but once he has had a wash and got a uniform on you will understand he is perfect.  He has the best handwriting and a MASSIVE brain!  He has good reading, if you heard him read you will get your mind blown!  You will even level him up to Year 6 level reading.  If you are stuck on a word, he will tell you.  Another brilliant thing about Ben is his maths is amazing, he can do his 6x, 8x well, he can do them all.
 
One reason that Ben is good for teachers is he is amazing at colouring and drawing.  He magically puts all the children in line in one second.  At lunch, he hands out all the lunchboxes, but gives spas to the teachers.  How unfair!  Although, lucky for you as you don't get to play outside.   He helps listen to children read and when we all go home he does all the cleaners work.  He is like flash, as he cleans all the classes in seconds.  That's cool right?
 
One special reason why Ben makes our magical learning school special is how he exemplifies our lovely co-operative school values.  Magnificent Ben loves to discuss his work because it inspires him to help learn.  Ben shows this by being Ready, Safe and Respectful.  This is amazingly cool because he can make everything ready to go.  In addition, Ben likes to help around school as he gives teachers their favourite chocolate, for example Mr Powell loves Maltesers so he will give him them.
 
85% of the teachers in the school believe an alien would be a good addition to the class.
 
Kindest regards,
 
AD 4JP



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​Dear Mrs Dawson,
 
I am writing to explain that our new awesome, purple, green, blue, friendly, helpful classmate Boogie from Party Space must be allowed to join our lovely school.  We found him in the woods.  You should know that Boogie is non-mean, smart and when get hurt he will help us.
 
The best reason why Boogie is wonderful for pupils is how Boogie always focuses well in lessons, happily tries hard with activities and persistently perseveres when things are tough.  How kind!  The second reason why Boogie is positive for pupils is Boogie always helps pupils around our classroom by helpfully pushing chairs under tidily tidying away before lunch and kindly placing lids on glue sticks.
 
One awesome thing about my classmate Boogie is he has begun to share with us cool fantastic old pictures of his past.  What a great time to learn about strange places!  Would it be great to have a smart alien join our class?  A different thing about Boogie, whenever he is around, he replaces Mr Powell's old slow laptop with a faster new one so that greatly helps Mr Powell teach us.
 
Next reason why Boogie makes our school a better places is how they exemplify brilliant co-operative school values.  Boogie loves to discuss his old school, be very kind and makes new friends.  This is awesomely cool because he could help others when they are hurt.
 
85% of the teachers in the school believe an alien would be a good addition to the class.
 
Kindest regards,
 
PG 4JP